Thursday, January 26, 2006




looking outside
through the gate, a kitten
once stray



in and out
of the ostrich's cage
sparrows



awakened
a crab climbs over
the cold rocks



nobody
in the pool area--
chicos



3 Comments:

Blogger Eric said...

a couple of nice images here. i especially like sparrows in an ostrich's cage.

1:11 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

tito roh mih i like these especially the 2nd and 3rd haikus.

Grabe tito roh mih natuto at nainspire po akong sumulat ng mga haiku at senryu dahil po sa inyo. thank u po!

you're the best!ΓΌΓΌ

melvin

12:30 PM  
Blogger Brad said...

I also like you haiku here, especially the second one, "in and out" what a great first line.

maybe edit the first to be simpler:

through the gate
a kitten,
once stray

Cheers
brad's haibun

2:11 AM  

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